Great song. Grats on best of week!!!!
Thanks muchly :D
You're fun facts aren't fun.
How can I make them more divertido?
I thought this was super cool. Perhaps your best song. Good luck in the competition.
You know what eric, YOU'RE super cool!
i <3 u
when you could walk down dark alleys and wild monkeys would scratch you back for nickel.
The melody behind this song is really unique and spaced out. I enjoyed a hell fo a lot.
Nice work! Its epic trance, except with congo drums XD
And in 1872, Lance Armstrong went to the moon and ended the cold war.
Atomic Trigger 3
"kinda soothing at the beginning then it wakes you up makes you remember why you chose to listen to this song "
Exactly. I switched to the other window forgetting that I had music going, then it hit 1:04. Great song.
My knowledge on this style of music isn't quite my forte. Overall I think this song is awesome and definitely well-done. I think this would fit perfectly as background music for a plethora of games.
A couple of points I would suggest tweaking:
Mainly, I feel that the instrument introduced at 0:11 (sounds bell-like) that carries on through the remainder of the song ought to have some sort of variation - whether it is tweaking the pitch or having the hits change every so often. My reason is because it is rather repetitive, and I think takes away from the replay value of the song.
Following the percussion fill (at 2:24) I think you should highlight the percussion a little more by increasing their volumes and have it as if someone was essentially playing a solo. This is the climax of your song, so I think it might improve it with some additional energy.
If I were you, I would play around with the concept of introducing additional instruments, whether it is another of the main melody harmonizing with it, or simply some background chords from whatever. I think this would add sort of an interesting orchestral sound to it. It might sound better - might not.
Great job on this song. I look forward to hearing your future submissions.
Exactly the type of review I need! I took note of these suggestions and will work it out.
Thanks for the 10!
Awesome song. Loved every second of it.
<3 this song.
<3 you too :D.
This is great for your first attempt at FruityLoops. I'm quite impresed. If I were you, I'd cut the intro up to 0:43, because its a little drawn out and becomes slightly irritating. Just as you addressed in your comments, you ought to cut the ending by quite a bit, that too drags on. The meat of the song is yummy tho.
thanks for the input. i agree with you about both the intro and the ending. especially the ending!
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